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Tuesday, March 14, 2017

Poem About a Story

My brother is telling a story, 
something loud and exaggerated 
about encounters with past women 
passed on after late nights at the Boar’s Head:

She had too many bibles, he says - 
then she told me she loved me - 
she told me she was vegan - 
What was I supposed to do?

I am laughing, not just at the story, 
but at the way his hair grows taller 
with every new white lie, the way
he holds his cigarette too much like a joint - 
he can’t help but give himself up. 

I like the ease of nonsense, 
the comfort of what doesn’t matter, 
the throwaway moments that keep us
from getting too close to the things 
we both carry. 

Eventually, he chuckles and sighs his way 
to a stop, threatens to let the world back in,
and between gasps I hear myself plead, tell it again, 

oh, please won't you tell it again. 

3 comments:

  1. This is awesome. It's all hinging on that 4th stanza, when you realize the speaker's brother is 'hiding' behind these pointless stories, but then those last two stanzas the speaker reveals that they also cant handle "the things we both carry", and its so soft and subtle in the 'thought speech' of the last sentence.

    also, just love "Eventually, he chuckles and sighs his way
    to a stop, threatens to let the world back in,"

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  2. This is a wonderful poem about a story, playfully focused on the brother telling it and by telling reveal his character, and even the pathos of the shared situation. The poem ends (resolves) beautifully with the repeated entreaty. Does hair get "taller"-- you mean standing on end? I love this poem.

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  3. I really love the unexpected imagery here. The hair getting taller (reminds me of Pinocchio) and the strange specificity of the details (too many bibles, vegan, etc). Great!

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